Collan, without the benefit of cover, is much more exposed than Niil had been. Still, he grips his pistol and makes a break for it, leaping into the air. He is already airborn when he realizes the shimmering was in a slightly different position. He lands hard, but keeps his feet by rolling into a crouch, coming to a stop less than a meter from the edge of the ship.
"Juno! Go!" says General Kota.
"Hang on!" she responds, and it is all you can do to keep from being thrown off as the ship starts to move. It's not a moment too soon - a moment later a turbolaser shot passed through the space you had recently occupied.
Collan goes to the edge of the ship where Niil is barely hanging on, and helps his fellow apprentice up to relatively safer ground. Glancing up, Collan can see the techs, pistols raised, scanning the air, but apparently unable to see you.
The top hatch opens, and PROXY is there. Moments later you are back inside.
General Kota looks grim. "These Imperials are reacting faster than I anticipated. The good news is you are taking a lot of pressure off the men on the station. The bad news is that the Imperials have directed assault shuttles to reinforce the remaining platforms. If you are quick, you might get one more before they are guarded by stormtroopers."
He strokes his beard. "I think it is time we called in the fighters. We could use them as escort on the way to orbit, but that doesn't matter of we can't bring down the cannons."